WALT: Write An Introduction That hooks your audience
“Mum can I call Max, please”
“ok, Jhon,” replied mum
RING RING RING RING goes mum’s phone it turns out the Max was calling me so I answered.
“Hi Max”
“Hi John”
“Max do you want to do a trade for your cat the one you brought to pet day at school”.
“Ok, I guess What for” “umm I don’t know come to my house this afternoon and I will show you... ok bye, Max”.
“Bye John”.
“Mum can Max come over this afternoon”
“Sure John”
“Yay,” I responded.
Then I go upstairs to my room and leave mum in the living room. RING RING RING RING goes mums phone (again) “it’s for you!”Mum screamed on the top of her voice.
I answered the phone oh its max.
“Sorry John I will have to come at 7:00 pm an I will bring my cat”
“but IT'S SATURDAY MORNING” max ended the call.
“Oh well,” I say.
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